1.
Is there a clear introductory sentence that
introduces the topic? What do you suggest for improvement of the introductory
sentence?
2.
Is there a thesis statement in the last sentence
of the introductory paragraph? Is it connected to the whole paragraphs?
3.
Do the paragraphs have sufficient supporting
details and examples and how is the organization?
4.
Are there any paragraphs that out of the topic
and do not have relevant supporting details or examples?
5.
Does the conclusion summarize all the main
points of the essay or restate the thesis statement? If no, how can it is
improved?
6.
Do you find any citation of sources in the
essay?
7.
Is there any grammatical or spelling mistakes?
What are they?
8.
Does the writer cover the appropriate materials?
